User talk:Johnny 115

Just a pointer: you're supposed to write your own articles. You can get help from other users, but you can't expect other people to do all the work for you.  Yours Truly,   Explorer 767 ( TurtleShroom x RocketSlug = TurtleSlug  )   v   •  [ e ]  00:42, 13 April 2011 (UTC)

My editing
Actually, i prefer to edit in increments. I've been doing this for (almost) two years now! Do you really think I don't know that?

That's alright, It's normal for me to do it this way. It's actually one of the things i'm known for.

--  02:27, 19 April 2011 (UTC)

Your Image
Hello, Johnny, i (accidentally) stumbled across your cover picture on your contributions. If you wanted me to look at and judge that cover picture that you made, you should have put it on my talk page; otherwise i might have never have found it at all.

As much as I like fans who like my work, i do not need a cover page...i was actually planning to do it myself or have XTUX or Austin do it since they're professionals.

Thank you for the image, but i must say it does need more work, no offense. Don't lose heart, for the image you made is quite good for a beginner like you.

However, i should note some thing you should improve. Here at the CPFW, we support constructive (that is, helpful) criticism to improve things.




 * First off, the puffles.....they...don't look like puffles....they look like fuzzballs. Nevertheless they are good for a start. Their eyes are actually white, not blue...just like any other animal... Try to study the shapes of the puffles and try to draw them more precisely.


 * Second, the title of the story still has some white blotches in there. Try to make sure those don't occur....i advise typing after you put in the background


 * Third, the blue background is quite plain and somewhat dull....be creative and come up with an inspiring and interesting background that is inspired by the story!

As for the basic setup of the picture, you did well. Just keep in mind the three things you should work on.

I hope you find this helpful! Welcome to the wiki, By the way, if i haven't said so already.

--  00:27, 30 April 2011 (UTC)