User blog:Zone/Tales of Deception

SO I started writing Tales of Deception. Do not think of it as an ego stroke, I merely wrote it so that people could understand Zone and Kill's character better.

There's a few things I'd want to clarify before I go on writing more;


 * 1) In Chapter 5, Zone acquires an ability called the Mind Distorter. Basically, his left eye turns red and if he looks directly at someone, he can give them an order and they will do it. It only works once on each person though (yes, I sadly went the unoriginal route and plagiarized parodied Code Geass in this part)

What happens is that Zone is surrounded by Pengolian guards, who plan to fire at him with their deletion rifles. Zone uses the Mind Distorter and orders them to shoot at themselves, which ensures their deletion. I had a feeling it might be against the COC, but since things like Demon Penguins are allowed, and the CyberVoid being an alternative to a bloody, gruesome death I went through with it anyway.


 * 1) There may be a few OOC's involved within the story, so the owners of other characters (Professor Shroomsky, Kwiksilver, Luce etc.) feel free to fix it, I won't stop you.


 * 1) Give me reviews about the story please. I'll begin to draw things for the chapters later on, so give reviews about those too when you can. I finally mastered the art of drawing frills (those very queer looking lacey things underneath Zone's bowtie :3) so the next Zone I draw will probably be my best yet. If I can nail down hand drawing - even better.

Thanks  http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/1254/lockkey.png  ZoneKill    T   C   E    11:44, June 25, 2010 (UTC)