Talk:Salt and the City

Do tell me how you've enjoyed the story and give me your ideas here! I will gladly consider them! -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 16:05, 23 September 2018 (UTC)

Other Discussions
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I have not read this yet but I would like to request Mr Cow2 appears in a cameo as a hobo. I will tell you my thoughts once I've read it. --Mr Cow2 (talk) 01:09, 24 September 2018 (UTC)


 * but why would I do that to you you're a friend -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 12:59, 24 September 2018 (UTC)

Just so you know, replacing every intended reference to God with Kermit, Benny, Billybob, etc. is just transparent, lazy writing. -- Bro  Talk to me! 14:21, 8 October 2018 (UTC)


 * if you have a better idea, do tell me -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 14:36, 8 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Write with a shred of tact and don't include stuff like that at all. There's other ways of getting your point across than saying "oh god" or "i swear to god" every second line. --CanadaFlag.png Bro  Talk to me! OHYEAH.png 15:28, 8 October 2018 (UTC)


 * It's all part of the character. Penstubal is repetitive and hysterical and he always repeats the same similar phrases. For example, early on in the story, he repeated "seriously" and "like" all the time as well. -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 17:38, 8 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Excuse me Bro how dare you insult the literary genius of pen focusing on such minor details of a character, invoking the characterization of Patrick Bateman -- User:EDFan 12345  💀🎺♪♪  18:13, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

salt and the city, more like bore ragnarok --Chill57181 (Talk - Contributions  - My Articles )  01:52, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
 * infinity snore --CanadaFlag.png Bro  Talk to me! OHYEAH.png 02:23, 9 October 2018 (UTC)
 * I mean, if you don't like the story, you don't have to torture yourself reading it. Does anybody ever expect (or even wish) to satisfy everyone? -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 16:16, 9 October 2018 (UTC)

social experiment
hello everyone

do not mind me

actually do mind me, and take my poll, thanks

Do you intend on reading Salt and the City? Yes, the entire story Yes, but I will skim it Only the parts with the characters I care about No, because it's too long No, because I don't care No for another reason

please keep in mind this is in the name of science thanks

--Mario Rk 23:54, 10 October 2018 (UTC)


 * you can hold whatever poll you want but that doesn't change the fact I'm writing this for myself and those interested and am never stopping writing it -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 11:10, 11 October 2018 (UTC)


 * its in the name of science sir, it is by no means a suggestion for you to stop writing plz do not take this the wrong way kthx --Mario Rk


 * "never stopping" oh no it's a neverending story --Chill57181 (Talk - Contributions  - My Articles )  18:04, 11 October 2018 (UTC)


 * If it's a never ending story then I might as well just forget about every trying to read it. --Mr Cow2 (talk) 22:23, 11 October 2018 (UTC)


 * I meant I am never stopping writing it until I finish. I had 9 chapters in vision and I meant that I will never stop writing it until I write those 9 chapters. -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 11:12, 12 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Nice. I will try to read it in that case. --Mr Cow2 (talk) 13:47, 12 October 2018 (UTC)

guys we've updated the social experiment for SCIENCE purposes, plz vote --Chill57181 (Talk - <font color = "FF8400">Contributions  - <font color = "EAA000">My Articles )  00:06, 14 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Honestly, this is the one of the pettiest things I’ve ever seen on this wiki. I’ll make it clear right here that I’ll read the story in its entirety. -- SlenderXP  Talk to me   00:25, 14 October 2018 (UTC)


 * it's just a social experiment, nothing to get salty about smh --<font color = "FF8400">Chill57181 (<font color = "EAA000">Talk - <font color = "FF8400">Contributions  - <font color = "EAA000">My Articles )  00:31, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
 * This is clearly a thinly-veiled attempt to bully the author, if anything. I really question the values of those who are able to see through this for what it really is, yet who remain silent. I’m utterly disappointed that this is what you have to do just because you don’t really like the author. -- SlenderXP  Talk to me   00:58, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Really it's to see how users react to long stories like this (it's the 6th longest page on Fanon last time I checked), and it's obviously more divisive than something written by ARB would be. Just genuine curiosity. --<font color = "FF8400">Chill57181 (<font color = "EAA000">Talk - <font color = "FF8400">Contributions  - <font color = "EAA000">My Articles )  01:29, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
 * If that’s truly the case, then I’ll apologise for any misunderstanding. -- SlenderXP  Talk to me   07:40, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
 * You haven't seen the ending yet, where Penstubal concludes "stuff", Pentubal in his older days but I'm not going to spoil it -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 11:29, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Have any of you ever heard about being able to replicate results? It's an important part of the scientific method smh --CanadaFlag.png <font color="#0fd000"><font color="006C91">Bro  Talk to me! OHYEAH.png 00:36, 14 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, and for the sake of authenticity, I’m going to state my opinion here where everyone can see it. -- SlenderXP  Talk to me   00:58, 14 October 2018 (UTC)


 * put No because it's too long, which is true. I read the first chapter, but then days after Stubal added tens of thousands of bites of somewhat incoherent rambling and diary-like content and I'm not interested enough to bother. I haven't read much of Rogue's stories either, which are actually formal stories, if it makes you feel any better.   C  K   Sysop  02:07, 14 October 2018 (UTC)


 * it's an autobiography -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 11:30, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

Clarification
The story is not user me "rambling", it is character me "rambling", and the story offers a chronology of my "insanity" - from the days when I didn't hate Chill and CK and found them to be good friends, later evolving into rivalry and eventually culminates with a full-scale hate on Penstubal's side towards Chill and Penquino and their "Da Illuminati" cult that Penstubal alleged existed. This story offers a history of my "war" and is yet to reach the kind of relationship I have with Chill and CK which I consider far more amicable in comparison to the previous years. -- Penstubal (Talk) (Edits) 11:39, 14 October 2018 (UTC)

wow
Just reading the reviews...

I must read this when I can at some point! :D

Do you agree with my thought that Penstubal is Fanon Wiki's Proust and that this story is Fanon Wiki's "Remembrance of Things Past"? Yes Maybe No He's our Proust but not "Remembrance of Things Past" It's our "Remembrance of Things Past" but not Proust Madeleine Please Moncrieff Please Proust Please I want to revoke my madeleine/Moncrieff/Proust/whatever <span title="Current status: In Search of Lost (Proustian) Time!"> Penguinpuffdude  <span title="'Whereof one cannot speak, thereof one must remain silent.' - Ludwig Wittgenstein"> It's time for a chat, no?    04:32, 8 November 2019 (UTC)