Talk:Wikia Catastrophe/Planning Sheet

Homestuck? Isn't that a MS Paint Adventure? Those are awesome. --Austin8310 King Radical. The most Radical Man in Radical Land.http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/13p27/ 04:28, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

Indeed they are, friend. I'm up to date on Homestuck and I also finished Problem Sleuth.

I was wondering if you'd like to include XTUX's and your characters in the story as a subplot? All the information is in the Overview.--Kwiksilver - It's a chicken, Lewis. A NETHER CHICKEN!!  06:40, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

These are some nice ideas, but Malcur isn't gonna be in the Wikia Catastrophe. He just feels unnecessary, so I request he gets left out.

Aw, c'mon, Speed. I've already written at least a scene or two of the subplot. And sweet, you did Homestuck and Problem Slueth? I got bored of Homestuck because I tried to do it all at once, so I'm going to try it later. --Austin8310 King Radical. The most Radical Man in Radical Land.http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/13p27/ 03:10, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I just feel Malcur adds nothing to the story. The only villains we really need are Virus and his minions.

But I already started writing that part. Seriously. Here's an exerpt.

Tails hit the floor of the cell.

It hurt. A lot.

He got up looked around. There were two other figures in the cell-both penguins. They were probably rollbacks or traitors of some sort. The cell was damp, musty, and somewhat dark. The only light came from the hole in the roof where he had been thrown in.

"Hello?"

The two penguins stopped their conversation and stared at him. One walked forward, towards the light, and Tails was able to see him clearly. The penguin walking towards him was a green Khanz. His feathers were starting to gray a bit, and he had...hair. That was weird. It almost reminded him of that one penguin Speeddasher hated. Whoot, that was it! Anyway, he was wearing a somewhat torn up jacket and a belt.

"Are you an ally of McFlapp?"

His voice was strained, and harsh. Clearly, he had been in here for a while.

"Yes. Who are you?"

"I'm Austin8310. Call me Austin. I'm a rollback for McFlapp. Me and XTUX were sent to guide Tidalwave to the Wikia Key, but Virus seized it, deleted Tidal, and threw us in this miserable pit."

"Where's XTUX?"

"He's back there. He's recharging."

"Recharging?"

"He's a cyborg. It's a long story, and to be frank, I don't feel like telling it. But it's good to meet you. So, how did you end up in here?"

"I was captured by Virus, along with my friend Speeddasher, after heading to the Marioverse. I hope he's okay."

"Don't hope. Virus is harsh. If your friend isn't in here or the other cells, he's dead."

The words struck Tails like a slap in the face.

"He's not dead!"

"Don't get your hopes up. He's probably dead. Look. Let me tell you a few things. Me and XTUX have been waiting for days for something to appear to get us out of here. A loose brick, a careless guard, or maybe...another prisoner. Now, let me explain. This cell is about 20-"

"I DON'T CARE ABOUT YOUR PLAN! He's not dead!"

Austin gripped Tails by the neck.

"Look, it's not going to help your friend, if he isn't dead, to not listen to our plan. It's the only way out. And me and XTUX need your help."

"He can't be dead. I've known him for years."

"Death happens. Whether you expect it or not. I heard that our universe is deleted. Do you know how many of my friends are dead now? Java Ghent is dead. SN is dead. Django is dead. Johnathan probably didn't make it out. Flywish is dead. And there was nothing I could do about it. If we had retrieved the key, prehaps things would be different. But they aren't. Now, the best thing you can do for him right now is to get it together and help us."

There was an awkward silence.

"Okay. I'll help you get out."

They shook their flippers together.

"Now, as I was saying, the cell is about 20 feet tall. Now, we're too short to get up there...but that's what they think. XTUX is a cyborg, and he has rockets in his feet. However, they've been almost used completely, but if we get him on top of us, stacked together, he can reach the top, and let down a rope. Now once we do that....."

---

cut to next scene

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It's a pretty nice scene you wrote there. We can include it in the story, but we can have Speed be in a different cell for another reason. It's like I said above, Malcur adds absolutely nothing to the story. His plan never goes anywhere, and he doesn't really do much other than jump from universe to universe.

It took a while for me to decide whether or not to include Malcur in this, but I decided to in the end because when you think about it, how did Virus get the knowledge on how to Grammatomatize himself? He's clearly insane and cunning, but he's not that smart. After Malcur was defeated in Twilight and Shadow, something that evil would leave echoes. Virus (who is Kwiksilver from Anti Club Penguin Fanon if you didn't know) would have picked up on these echoes and brought Malcur back as a powerless ghost. Malcur gave him the plan and the know-how, and everything. As payment, he would demand a body so he can wreak havoc once more.

Now, Malcur's smart too. Virus trusts him, maybe too much, so Malcur's plan is to use him to create chaos, then obtain the body and overpower the villain. After that, taking control of the multiverse will be an easy task. However, Malcur's first target is Kwiksilver. He's seen Kwiksilver's work (although most of it was a fluke) and needs to get rid of him first before he gets rid of Virus.

I've cut down his plot as much as I can. Pretty much he's only possessing Speeddasher for a couple of hours, and Tails gets the Blade of Light given to him instead of having to look for it or putting on that silly Enerjak armour. Also, placing Tails as the strongest man in the world gives him some serious status, and his hesitance to hurt his friend Speeddasher I intend to make one of the greatest bromances in history, rivalling that of Kwiksilver and Willy.

By the way Austin, I really love that scene!--Kwiksilver - It's a chicken, Lewis. A NETHER CHICKEN!!  10:30, 11 December 2011 (UTC)

True, I've always pictured Virus as sort of a weak villain who hides behind his cronies. The only thing I disagree with is the title of "strongest man". The reason being, atleast from what I've seen, Malcur is far from being the strongest fighter in even the CPFW Universe. Take Sorrow for instance who's strong enough to battle with two super forms (I had an idea in which Speed and Zone go super an fight him once he's released), and gains possibly double that power when he transforms into Orphan.

No, he meant that Tails becomes the strongest character in the world. Anyway, I did write another scene, which is right after McFlapp's sendoff of Willy+Kwik+Speed+Tails+Explorer. Hmm, Explorer's kind of an odd one out. Annnyway. --- McFlapp watched as Willy, Kwiksilver (who had grown a beard), Speed, Tails, and Explorer teleported away. Benny broke the silence. "I think we should send out the rollbacks. We need to get the word out to other universes, and quickly. I've recieved calls from the Haloverse and several others. Virus has been attacking and destroying the bureaus of quite a few different universes. I'll go send out the rollbacks to various different universes to provide backup. I think our current universe is stable...for the moment. My main concern is that he might be able to get to Wikia, take over the deletion cannon, and obliterate everything that ever existed." McFlapp pointed out of the giant window of the BoF. There was a giant purple storm, obliterating and destroying everything in its path. "And what are you going to bally do about that?" "We and the rest of the employees will attempt to slow it down. We'll need to evacuate the citizens into the Bureau, and if it falls...I don't know. Maybe we'll go to Wikia. Anyway, we'll need to send somebody to retrieve the Wikia Key. That can't fall into Virus's posession. If it does, he'll be able to get into Wikia much easier." Without even waiting for McFlapp's reply, Benny strode from the room, and McFlapp wordlessly pressed the "Summon Rollbacks" key on his piano. Immediently, in the room Benny was in, around 21 penguins and a puffle or two appeared. Benny turned to face them. "In case you haven't notice, the whole universe is in danger. I have to be brief, because this is a disaster. If I'm quick enough, we can clean this up mess nicely before too much goes wrong. There's a giant storm messing this universe up, and it'll do the same thing to any other universe it hits. And it's spreading." He started passing out PDAs. "These are Wikia PDAs. They'll let you transport to any universe, edit a bit, and...where are they. XTUX? Austin? Get your faces over here and distribute your Rollback Guns." Two penguins seperated themselves from the crowd and started throwing out rollback guns. One was an older green-feathered Khanz, around 35, and the other one was a smaller red Adelie Penguin. The red one glared at Benny. "These things aren't cheap, Benny." he said in a robotic voice. "The whole universe is at stake. You can suffer a loss in profits at your shop." Once they finished, Benny resumed speaking. "Anyway, each of you choose a buddy, and teleport to another universe. Once you're there, try to help out the Bureau there, and help evacuate or fend off Virus's forces. Make sure you don't teleport to the same universe as somebody else, because that's a waste of rollbacks. Now, Austin, Tidal, and XTUX. I have a more special assignment for you. I know you and XTUX have killed somebody before, so you guys are good for this mission. Don't look at me like that. I need you guys to escort Tidal to the Simniverse, where the Wikia Key is located. You must retrieve and protect it at all costs." Austin, XTUX, and Tidal all saluted, although Austin and XTUX looked fairly disgruntled. And the Rollbacks started teleporting away in twos. "I wish you luck." said Benny. And then he left the room.

So, yeah. --Austin8310 King Radical. The most Radical Man in Radical Land.http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/13p27/ 00:09, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

I still think Malcur is pretty pointless in the story. I think we can just assume Virus found out about the Holy Wikia completely by accident, or he ended up finding a Vortex Manipulator and discovering all the different universes. Malcur doesn't need to be there at all, and is just a pointless subplot when you break it down.

Well, no. I think he's important, and let me explain why. Virus is just an angry insane freak alone. He's intelligent, but he's too insane to really get things going. However, if Malcur was defeated and his soul banished to another universe, Virus could summon it up, and thus Malcur is an important part of the plan. Malcur is intelligent enough to figure out the Holy Wikia and other universes-in fact, Virus's original plan was probably just to completely obliterate his own universe-not others. However, once he figures out Holy Wikia, he sets that as his goal, and Malcur simply wants to destroy as many universes as possible for revenge-thus, they're kind of important together. --Austin8310 King Radical. The most Radical Man in Radical Land.http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/13p27/ 21:24, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

But why would Malcur want to destroy all those universes? The only thing he ever wanted to destroy were his fellow High Penguins. Plus, how did Malcur get banished to another universe, and how the heck did Virus know about his existence, much less summon him?

Let me explain. Malcur is essentially an unstoppable spirit of hate. Once Malcur was defeated by the High Penguins, his soul was swept away from the force of the blow that killed him (high penguin magic whatnot). His ghost arrived in the AntiClubPenguinFanon with an explosion (I'm assuming anti-fanon has no bureau or anything, thus anything banished from other universes will just end up there), and Virus discovered him. Virus also hates everything, so...yeah, they teamed up. Any more technical stuff can be answered by this:

It's a big timey-wimey-wibbly-wobbly ball. Except it's nothing like that. --Austin8310 King Radical. The most Radical Man in Radical Land.http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/13p27/ 21:45, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

I explained this above but I'll explain it again. Malcur doesn't want to destroy any universes. Like any villain, he wants power. As a ghost he is essentially powerless, but he hasn't lost his mind. He is cunning enough to request a high-powered body to possess in exchange for helping Virus get his revenge. Once he gets the body, he will kill Kwiksilver to get him out of the way, then kill Virus and take control of the Deletion Cannon.

Virus isn't just insane. He's deleting universes for revenge. When he sat there on the steps of his school hall, crying next to the toaster that he had failed to cook toast in, Malcur appeared in a flash of green light, recently banished by Club Penguin Fanon. He was only a ghost. After a brief introduction, Malcur saw that Virus was crying and asked why. Once Virus told him, Malcur motivated him to get revenge on EVERYBODY. From that day forward, Virus devoted his life to learning the art of grammatomisation and formulating his master plan. Once the Super Penguins and X-Creatures arrived after being banished after the Power4U Affair, Virus recruited them to his army. This constant obsession drove him mad.

So as we can see, Malcur is the catalyst for Virus' master plan, and that's why he's important in the story.

RE: Tails and the Blade of Light - Tails might not neccesarily be the physically strongest, but he is the strongest mentally. He is pure of heart, loves his wife and his child, fights for justice and is always truthful. He is also a great sportsman in all that he does. In that way, Tails is the greatest warrior and the one worthy to wield the Blade of Light, as he is a hero of light. While I'm here I'd advise you both to have a look at wikiaspace.png. I had an error where I uploaded it several times, so it's pretty noticable on the recent changes. Or you could just go to the "File" page of the image to your right.

--Kwiksilver - It's a chicken, Lewis. A NETHER CHICKEN!!  23:13, 12 December 2011 (UTC)