Talk:Wikia Catastrophe

Complete Rewrite
While the other stories in the For Great Justice series might not need a complete rewrite, this one does. The re visioned Wikia Catastrophe's plot is going to be a lot different, but it still has the basic premise and the main events (for instance, Kwiksilver sacfricing himself to save Wikia). Major changes will be things such as new characters, the removal of Malcur and Metal Explorer (Cyclosus is gonna remain in the story though), and a long final battle that will involve Virus's massive fleet of airships launching a full scale assault on the Holy Wikia. One of the characters is also going to loose something important to them (I'm not saying who it is or what they loose at this point though), and it will have a slight tragic tone, but also quite a bit of comedy.

Not to rain on your parade, but that's a bad idea. You just deleted 210,000 friggin bits of text. Are you serious? Don't fix what isn't broken. --Austin8310 King Radical. The most Radical Man in Radical Land.http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/13p27/ 17:08, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Include some tie-ins with OUR move, please! Andrew (Minecrafter) (Freeciv) 19:48, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by that?

9_9 when we moved off wikia Andrew (Minecrafter) (Freeciv) 22:37, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

my. goodness...
TAILS ORDERED A FREAKING LASER?! I cant WAIT to see this

Taiz: atleast my guns are based off this guy *points to guntz again*

yeah...but still A LASER?! XD awesome idea speed :) Tails  6000  (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!! ) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 17:04, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

About the wikia move...
People have wanted me to incorporate our move from wikia into the story, but I'm not sure how to do it. If anyone has any ideas, please tell me. P.S. The reason I haven't edited much lately is because I've been writing more parts for the stories. I just haven't uploaded them yet cause they aren't finished.


 * The way I was originally going to do it was like this. After the multiverse had been restored, and Kwiksilver deleted, just before the funeral, I was going to add a quick, tense scene between McFlapp and Joeyaa. McFlapp is about to press a button that will sever CP Fanon's ties with Wikia, and Joeyaa is making a last ditch attempt via video call to get him to change his mind. Bureau of Fiction staff are watching. It would go something like this:

Joeyaa: Don't be daft, Mayor! A universe can't exist outside of Wikia, you know that! If you press that button your whole universe will fall into the void!

McFlapp: Joeyaa, flippin' know what I think? I think you're bluffing.

The entire staff of the Bureau of Fiction watched, glued to their screens at the images of their avian Author and this mushroom Monarch, staring at each other through their video screens.

Joeyaa: Now McFlapp, don't-

McFlapp: Can it, you bloomin' airhead! You're bluffing and you know it, Kwiksilver was right. You just love the power, don't you? If we split, the only flippin' loser will be you, with one less jewel in your crown, wot! Joeyaa: I-I-I think that- McFlapp: I've spoken to all the other universe's authors, and they're moving too. We don't want you lording it over us like a bloomin' king, tellin' us what we can and can't do. Last week you were trying to get us to wear these stupid flippin' Oasis uniforms, I reckon it was just so you could get some sick enjoyment out of it, wasn't it? Joeyaa: I thought they looked nice, sure they were a bit impractical but they still- McFlapp: I SAID BLOOMIN' CAN IT, YA BIG-HEADED NITWIT! We're all leaving, and there's not a flippin' thing you can do about it. Joeyaa: DON'T PRESS THAT BUTTON! McFlapp: Flippin' watch me.

McFlapp slammed his wing down on the red button and Joeyaa's feed stopped, and his desperate face fizzled out. There was a loud groaning noise, a screaming sound like fingernails down a chalkboard, and in the void the Bureau of Fiction building shook and rattled like a tin can. After a while, the shaking stopped. Workers straightened their computers and scrambled for their keyboards which had toppled off desks, waded through waist-deep seas of dislodged papers and waited for McFlapp to speak.

His video feed reappeared.

McFlapp: Ladies and Gentlemen, wot, the Club Penguin Fanon Wiki is now completely independent of Wikia!

Needless to say, there was thunderous applause.

--Kwiksilver - It's a chicken, Lewis. A NETHER CHICKEN!!  13:45, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Virus Redesign oppinions


Looking back at the last picture I made of Virus, it really isn't that impressive. Because of this, I decided to make a redesign of him. Please tell me what you think of it, and tell me what could be improved if there's any problems. Note: The burn on the top right of his head is from a toaster malfunction, and the missing teeth and swollen eye are just various wounds he recieved at some point.

what universe did speeddasher get? XD and if it's okami..I'm gonna laugh...that or something with NO FIGHTING XD (in which case...I'd saaaaay....PHOENIX WRIGHT ACE ATTORNEY! :D) Tails  6000  (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!! ) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 22:55, 10 November 2011 (UTC)

Okay that part was awesome :P
Taiz's scene in part 5 was pretty funny in temrs of the fact that he BOUGHT. EVERYTHING. that doof. said (yes, I used his abbreviation :P)

anyways speed, if I can atleast propose one small scene after he atleast escapes the tri-state area, I kindahave an idea where he lands next ^^ Tails  6000  (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!! ) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 22:56, 14 November 2011 (UTC)

If you have any ideas I'd love to hear them.

Cool, anyways if ya read his trivia, he's based off a Klonoa character right? thats where he's headed next... unless you have other plans...if so, then I got another plan....send him to the ace attorney universe XD I have a great idea for that (incase THAT is the universe speeddasher is in) Tails  6000  (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!! ) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 23:14, 14 November 2011 (UTC)

This is awful.

For one, you deleted 210,000 bytes of text.

Now you're replacing it with low-quality filler. Look, your writing is comedy, Speed. You can't write anything serious, it comes out as a joke. And to be quite frank, the main focus of the story was Kwiksilver and Willy. Tails/Speed were minor side characters on a quest to kill another antagonist. A sideplot. To be quite frank, they're dominating the story now. And this is just a joke, compared to what it used to be.--Austin8310 King Radical. The most Radical Man in Radical Land.http://drmcninja.com/archives/comic/13p27/ 23:22, 14 November 2011 (UTC)

I've noticed that quite a few people don't like the revamps, so if no one likes it then I'll stop revamping the stories. I'm actually thinking of quitting editing all together sooner or later if I can't come up with more ideas because I've lost a lot of interest in Club Penguin. I'd still come to the wiki because I do like to chat with a lot of the people here, but I'd stop editing. If anyone wants me to stop writing For Great Justice or continue writing it please tell me.

Words to the Wise
Hey Speed, I've been trying to get in contact with you for a while now so I'll keep this short and sweet as I have to go to bed soon.

Your intentions are great and I do love your new introductions for each character, but yes I'll agree, you still need to work on your dramatic style. Your work isn't awful, though, it's just not the right style for this story. You're a born comedy writer, that's your avenue and you're well developed in that so don't forget it, but I recommend practicing drama when taking on a story like this. I'm the opposite, I'm a dramatic writer who needs to work on comedy.

Your penchant for own character writing has taken over somewhat (but don't worry I do it all the time xD). I really appreciate your taking action on this story and I love the new pictures you're drawing, especially Hobosilver (right). My advice? Work on the Power4U Affair. Expand it. It's your type of story. Your real challenge will be the final battle and Sprocket's death, and that's where I think you should practise your drama.

Keep on writing, brother :)

Oh, and PS - Do you have a Minecraft account?

--Kwiksilver - It's a chicken, Lewis. A NETHER CHICKEN!!  13:59, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Characters
Can Star, Person and the SoL be in the story? Star kirby12 11:01, 23 February 2012 (UTC)

I think we can do this- Person says that Wikia can be saved by using the MasterForce, but whoever does it will be deleted. Kwiksilver volunteers. As everyone except Kwiksilver, Willy, Star and the SoL are fighting Virus' minions, Virus' best minion appears, and Star fights against it. The rest you guys can write. Star kirby12 11:48, 23 February 2012 (UTC)

Adopt
Can I adopt this article? There isn't a lot of work done around here, besides Speeddasher quit. I also have some ideas, see here. Hello, my name is Star Kirby12. Chat first, ask questions later. Then let's do something! Tobot? &bull; Some challenges? &bull; A few drafts and stuff? AND MAH RANDOM IMAGE!!!! 07:01, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

Story on hold
I'm not updating the story right now, because I need the proper ideas plus I'm working on Ultimate Club Penguin Adventures. Hello, my name is Star Kirby12. Chat first, ask questions later. Then let's do something! &bull; Tobot? &bull; Some challenges? &bull; A few drafts and stuff? &bull; AND MAH RANDOM IMAGE!!!! 09:42, 1 May 2012 (UTC)