Talk:Snow's Book

Please add suggestions here! -- This is a Puffle. This is a talk page. And here is a notepad. There's the good, the bad, and the Dada-Mama. 23:16, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

Stop piling more stuff onto a Mary Sue, actually give your characters development instead of ripping them off of Fooly's, make your own pictures (or don't use any at all), make an actually interesting plot,

oh and longer chapters.

--Mr Cow2 (talk) 02:43, 4 February 2016 (UTC)

Done. Mary-sue like qualities already taken care of, Orgins of SPB explained, working on pictures,events now more detailed, and chapter is quite long. -- This is a Puffle. This is a talk page. Here's a notepad. '''BEWARE OF THE EVIL... uhh... what evil creatures lurk there?''' 16:16, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

the one thing
I forgot to plot-plot. -- This is a Puffle. This is their talk page.   Here's a notepad!    01:53, 22 November 2016 (UTC)