Talk:Foe Stummer

Hey PPD, I was checking out your rework of this page so far and I couldn't help but notice that this is very close to being a "story" article, where it's an article but gives most of its information in a story format, with lots of character dialogue as if the events were being described in an actual story rather than being written like an ordinary article. (X-Antibodies seem to end up doing this a lot for whatever reason) The reason I'm bringing this up is that articles that are very heavy or rely entirely on this type of content usually end up being rated LQA, even when they have AQA amounts of content.

Now, that being said, this is some pretty good writing you have here. If you want to, I think it would be neat to take this and make a story out of it, maybe like an unseen narrator telling Foe's life story to some sort of invisible audience. I hope I didn't discourage you, just wanted to give you a heads up before you got too far on this. --Chill57181 (Talk • Contributions )  03:03, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi Chill; yep, I too noticed that so far it is getting rather "story"-ish, but I must admit that this isn't one of my best feats of Fanon work...! The name says it all (Foe Stummer = Joe Strummer; I would change it but I can't think of anything else). I considered moving it to userspace when I stuck on the "Rewrite" template so I could "mould" it into shape at my own leisurely pace, but ultimately didn't because of the debate over Asd-Fghjkl. Yes, it is a good idea to make a story out of this! Ideas are now brewing...  Penguinpuffdude Hiking.png  It's time for a chat, no?    04:32, 27 November 2019 (UTC)